Traditional Osso Buco: Feedback Notes — Carmen Maria von Unrug

Lily's Feedback

For the steps/instructions, number them instead of relying on the paragraphs to make it easier to follow. When making it for mobile format, put the ingredients first. Make different sections different colors; make certain headings and such different font sizes; make ingredients a larger font. Red is harder to read in general, so avoid it for clarity.

Tara's Feedback

Make it one coulmn. Ingredients should go before instructions. Put how long it takes to make the meal as well as how many people it serves. Consider font choice for when it is formatted for the phone due to it being smaller; make the leading bigger perhaps. Make ingredients and text left aligned. Bold ingredients and gremolata.